Saturday, October 1, 2005

The Old Oak Tree Comments

Rating: 4.7

At the high school I first went
One girl I met such time wasn't spent
Because one look at her I wanted to fight
Evil thoughts about her bothered me day and night
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Keith Williams
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 October 2005

Interesting! Images are vivid! Suggestion...when these images FIRST appear begin to separate each BEFORE you attempt to connect them. Like a puzzle almost! you have it all there I feel! Be a little bit more patient and those pieces will fall together less forced You will understand! L

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