The Old Nurse Comments

how primordial try evolving in like 10 million years ; -9 A+

Wow I had to read this twice over before I began drawing together your message. Welfare of mind vs. bottom line. I have a friend employed in behavioral healthcare. I've talked with him about many of the things you touch on in this poem. It's a sad reality. But I think it is improving. Even just 50 years ago many of the techniques used were nothing short of barbaric. That's not to say that we can't get a lot better. Well written and thought provoking. Great work

Enjoyed this very much. Only suggestions after first read, would be to reduce the number of ands around lines 17 to 19. Danny.