The Old Men Comments

Sad poem but almost has the feel of him going home. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

The mysterious grave eventually becomes everybody's home.

Btaemi sibkti gtmi. Gtmtatki kab gzie nab gzie endasebekeu ymesu alewu. mishaf Aytekuartsi.

you seem to have a natural ability to see things others take for granted, this is a poem of great promise, you have the ability to write what you see, further practice and reading of others work will only help to make you an even better writer. regards Vince