Friday, April 7, 2017

The Old Man's House Comments

Rating: 5.0

We unlocked the house with a creaking door
As the cobwebs blew across the dusty floor
It seemed as if no one had been inside
When it was closed by the family who didn't want to abide
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Paul Warren
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Christopher Tye 08 April 2017

A really nice poem, a joy to read.

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Rajnish Manga 08 April 2017

It felt as if we were reading a ghost story or a mystery tale. The narrative has the reader hooked on to it. The poet has been successful in creating the right atmosphere. Thanks.

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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