We unlocked the house with a creaking door
As the cobwebs blew across the dusty floor
It seemed as if no one had been inside
When it was closed by the family who didn't want to abide
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It felt as if we were reading a ghost story or a mystery tale. The narrative has the reader hooked on to it. The poet has been successful in creating the right atmosphere. Thanks.
A really nice poem, a joy to read.