Monday, April 30, 2007

The Old Man In My Bed Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke this morning to find
An old man in my bed.
Short grey halo
Surrounding his bald head,
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Sallie Howson
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James B. Earley 20 March 2008

What a splendid portrait you paint my friend! Thanks. Please read my 'Anniversary.'

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Broken Peaces 20 December 2007

When you accept what the mirror says then youn are at peace with yourself and all around good write top marks Chris

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Paul Buttigieg 09 November 2007

I want to cheer for you and your old man..........................and the mirror for telling it's tale. We are all going where you are.......it's not such a bad place. Love is special. Great poem

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Molaire Jules 26 June 2007

''Beautiful! Nice Job''

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George Wootton 22 June 2007

Simply beautiful! ! ! So many times I have thought the same things as I find time has changed so much about me and the one that I love so much. I still have young thoughts but the hardware is worn and frayed. Great poem.

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Ernestine Northover 07 May 2007

What a lovely storyline. Very warming and loving and comfortable to read. Delightful write. Love Ernestine XXX

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Sid John Gardner. 01 May 2007

Nice tribute Sallie.Well written. Sid John x

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Francesca Johnson 01 May 2007

Nice one Sallie. And congratulations to you both. Wishing you many more grey-haired wrinkly years of bliss! x Love, Fran xx

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 April 2007

A poem full of suspense till the end.

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