Thursday, March 26, 2015

The Old Man And The Table Comments

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I sit at the table
An old man, an old table
The candle is old
The bread is moldy
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Arthur Vaso
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Geoffrey Fafard 01 April 2015

This poem reminds me that as we grow old we are like crumpled paper still paper but not much good to write on! The imagery is brilliant and the translation of thought to written word is insightful and wonderful. I will be looking for more work from you.Good writing...

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Arthur Vaso 20 June 2015

Thank you so much for you kind words! ! ! ! ! Cheers!

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Arthur Vaso 20 June 2015

Thank you so much for your kind words! ! !

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Casarah Nance 27 March 2015

It shows the hardship of aging, it can feel so devastating that we are no longer who we were before. I can feel the moment with this.

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Arthur Vaso 27 March 2015

Hello there Casarah, see how great poets find each other! ! ! ! ! Hugs xxx

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Kelly Kurt 26 March 2015

As an older man, I understood and enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Arthur Vaso 27 March 2015

Thank you so much for your kind words! :)

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