Monday, June 20, 2011

The Old Man And His Muse Comments

Rating: 2.7

Lying inert on his creaking bed
The old man entertained himself
Watching a spider spinning a web
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Sandra Martyres
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Saadat Tahir 06 July 2012

i could see her sitting by... knitting needles in hand with knotted gnarled painful fingers knitting a sweater...slowly painstakingly doing the stitches and picking em again as she lost a few in the process... its very often difficult to read the poets context...but it made for a lovely read...steeped in silent appreciation and care that old age so requires, thanx sandra fab poem there :)

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Jo George 19 September 2011

Very good poem, with a difference. love reading.

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