The Old Man And His Grandson Comments

Great emotion in your words and too, a wonderful write. Happy new year also.

Hats off, Sir! ! What a write! ! ! : D

its just beyond words, amazing write.

a v nice touchy and factual poem u have written Kanav....yes grandchildren are v much attached to their grandparents as they see only love in them, no grudge, no worries when they are with them......i cud actually visualize my seven year old kid in this as he is v much attached to his grand mom and vice versa too...kids are innocent and know to pour only love and affection....once they grow up the other lines in your poems holds good for them too........ the below lines are so true: Some years in past, when he was young He raised loved ones of his big hearth At his final days the same old man Was the burden for those men of earth

The nuclear family is increasing in number but the sense of value is decreasing.Very relevant write and of course wonderful.

the verse narrative is not without the effects what the poet intended to cast upon the readers, yes, it is full of pathos...what a tragedy sometimes! parents look after many children but many children together cannot look after the parents without feeling a burden...sad! but in the end if a soul, a kid is missing him, it means all investment did not go wasted away...this one is ur involving write kanav justa!

a beautiful touching story like this one very much 10

really a heart touching story........i loved it.

Nice story. I really like your style of writing

A very touching story about really it doesn't matter how many people truly mourn our passing if we have a space in one child's heart that is like a piece of heaven to keep our souls alive! Beautiful write!

Once he had been the whole support of his family! Those who loved him then, see him as a burden in his last days of infirmity and there is none to grieve over his death except his little grandson! Yes, there is a special bond between grand parents and grand children! ! Nicely portrayed! !