Saturday, October 14, 2017

The Old Man Comments

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He had aged for every one of his days
As he worked his life away
They say the knees are the first to go
Then his back ache began to show
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Paul Warren
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

For labouring your life away Meant your life would be a shorter stay For honest labour has no choice And older people have no voice. . . .nice theme. Beautiful poem nicely presented. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Warren

Paul Warren

ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
Paul Warren
Paul Warren
ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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