Monday, May 19, 2014

The Old Man Comments

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just as everything is in its place
the cracked pitcher in the cellar's window
the maize porridge pot amid the veranda flowers
the knife sharpener in the kitchen table's drawer
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Cristina M. Moldoveanu
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Hello poet Christina, I think your grandfather would be proud, you have captured a keen part of growing old, he is blessed to have you as I'm sure you feel the same of him. I enjoyed. I just posted my poem An Old Soldier along with the musical recitation. If you have time, please check it out and let me know your thoughts. Thanks, Loyd

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