Thursday, January 26, 2006

The Old Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 4.3

There it stands
on the edge of the sands,
washed by spray
all night and day,
...
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Tan Pratonix
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Katherine Pinero 03 December 2016

Wow, such a nice poem but I think theres some hidden emotions underneath the old lighthouse. Thanks for sharing :) this deserves a 10++++

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Ronell Warren Alman 17 November 2016

Great poem written here Tan. Love that old lighthouse.

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Joyce Chelmo 24 April 2006

Haunting write.. I love lighthouses. I could almost see it. Joyce

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2006

If there is light to look at, darkness is diminished if only for a little while. As I read your lovely poem, I felt a sweet sadness for things of value that are gone forever. Thank you for sharing your old lighthouse with me.. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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Martin Turner 28 January 2006

All form and little content, Tan.

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