The Old is gold
Wednesday, August 19,2020
5: 47 PM
Old is gold
As I was told
The old memory is also like a precious thing
That brings, in mind, good remembrance
That smile is still for the best
I put everything to test
Even though in the foreign country
She was running a gym and keeping body very much fit
Years have passed by
Neither I nor did she try
To know what had happened in past years
Let it not prove the worst fears
Her smile was giving full echo
It was a melodious tune to blow
Giving full rhythm to the voice
That was really giving full promises
I miss that smile
If anyone can help me cover that gone mile
I shall call her presence worthwhile
I shall also post my smile with grace
Dr Jadia Hasmukh
Brilliant poem, she is looking and smiling with GOLDEN EYES, SIR! A beautiful woman-person, the theme of your poetry. I have enjoyed this most beautiful utterings from you, Hasmukh Sir! Old is gold As I was told The old memory is also like a precious thing That brings, in mind, good remembrance..............YESS! Old IS Gold in this poem. A 10+++
Poem: 59009078 - The Old Is Gold Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: Her smile was giving full echo It was a melodious tune to blow.....her beautiful smile is a beautiful poem of the poetic world...
Her smile was giving full echo It was a melodious tune to blow.....her beautiful smile is a beautiful poem of the poetic world...
Poem: 59009078 - The Old Is Gold Member: Psychiatric Nurse Comment: Have you taken your meds? No gold for you. Less popular day by day. Why do you stay? Pray tell us old man.
Poem: 59009078 - The Old Is Gold Member: Rainbow Bow Comment: No one wants to read English spilt like goat's milk on an Indian farm.
No one wants to read English spilt like goat's milk on an Indian farm.
Poem: 59009078 - The Old Is Gold Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Helping others is good with a broader smile. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned.
Helping others is good with a broader smile. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned.
Poem: 59009078 - The Old Is Gold Member: Sylvia Frances Chan Old is gold As I was told The old memory is also like a precious thing That brings, in mind, good remembrance..............YESS! Old IS Gold in this poem. A 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poem: 59009078 - The Old Is Gold Member: Sylvia Frances Chan Comment: Brilliant poem, she is looking and smiling with GOLDEN EYES, SIR! A beautiful woman-person, the theme of your poetry. I have enjoyed this most beautiful utterings from you, Hasmukh Sir!