The Old House Comments

A touching narrative, written from the heart. Thank you for sharing

Funny, the old childhood home by the bay, Writings on the walls probably gone away, My dreams of five, ten, fifteen and twenty, I’m much older now but still they are plenty.-> so nostalgic it touched me so much... a great collaboration! Luke, you didn t only keep the charm of Sulaiman's OLD HOUSE but your sweet style pours it out.. full of NOSTALGIA 10+++ Bravo, you both deserve clapping...

wonderful narrative poem, nice rhymes, a remarkable collaboration indeed.........10+++

You're really an amazing writer Luke.Bridging the patches is really your skillful field.Well this is a remarkable collaboration indeed.Thanks bro! !