Tuesday, August 25, 2009

The Old House Comments

Rating: 4.6

The red skies engulf the bay under
Whilst silence sweeps the current away
Islands, harbor, creeks, rocks and sholes
Soundings and anchoring
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Expiallidocious 23 December 2019

Tell me about something that was not covered by u.....Suleymon

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Krisdale Talidong 20 November 2009

A really nice poem... ^__^

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Natalya Mitchell 14 October 2009

thats a really great poem please write more s i can read them. hope your doing well!

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Ramsey Lynwood 26 September 2009

thats a really great poem very.... powerful words............

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Marieta Maglas 24 September 2009

Interesting and excellent poem, thank you for sharing................10++++++++++

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Keith Chapman 23 September 2009

The old house, full of sweet memories, expressed nicely! ..........

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 10 September 2009

Nice write... thanks for sharing

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 09 September 2009

Great poem that could make me sad, tks for sharing

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Promise 1990 07 September 2009

Love your imagery! ! !

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Solomon Bright Dankwa 07 September 2009

nice poem, well penned. like it very much.

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Analisssa Range 07 September 2009

Very nice write. You did a really good job with this keep it up.

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Aubrey silver 06 September 2009

great imagry i love it keep writing its great

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Jester's P 06 September 2009

memories of the past is a power enough to stimulate our emotion- the longing of what was beautiful, rich, best and good. however not all good things will last-the truth is 'we need to moveforward and learn how to look back in a smile of acceptance and willingness to learn from what was... nice poem...

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Carol Rhodes 04 September 2009

OH, SULAIMAN, YOUR POWER OF IMAGERY NEVER WANES OR FALLS TO THE LEVEL OF THE ORDINARY. I FINISHED READING AND FOUND MYSELF LONGING TO KNOW WHAT WAS LEFT BEHIND AND I SO WANTED TO PET THAT SWEET DOGGIE. PLEASE WRITE YOUR AUTOBIOGRAPHY. EVERY POEM IS LOADED WITH INTRIGUE. FROM WHENCE AND FROM WHOM DID YOU SPROUT, SIR?

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Alexis Meeks 04 September 2009

this is a great poem...i loved it sulaiman mohd yusof.....keep up the great work

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Melody Song 03 September 2009

It gives a great visual when you read it, and I thought it was a great poem.

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Hailey Agnew 02 September 2009

i really love it, especially the ending. please leave comments on a few of my poems, much appreciated :)

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 September 2009

What a great use of descriptive language. Well done

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Ruerd Visser 01 September 2009

Beautifull piece well done. would you be so kind to read my latest work the wish of the heavens? Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Khilil Perry 31 August 2009

Perfect 10 read my poem slave entrapment

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