The Old Creditor........... Comments

Tsira: I like this one a great deal. First, I like the reversal of someone being turned out of a place by someone else's delays. It is the creditor who says 'today' and the debtor who says 'tomorrow.' But if the creditor is turned out, well then whose property are we talking about? Second, I like the determination of the narrator who will say her say. There is ambiguity throughout the poem, but the determination in the end seems to cut through that, and leaves the reader feeling that this ambiguity will be addressed. Nicely done. Thank you. -G

eyes when delves deep all secrets even when veiled..........wonderful poem of unique genere, i like way write,10/10, thanks for sharing