Saturday, February 16, 2013

The Old Couple Comments

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Mr Hoard, and Mrs Save, met not long ago,
Yet recently did they realise, that they had a common foe.
Neither had been to battle, neither had been to war,
Yet each alone, agreed that, they shared a lot in store.
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Kay Moore
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Hardik Vaidya 16 February 2013

Kay Moore, I loved this poem, thought I must admit that I found it a trifle long, but you wrote it so well, that I could not leave it and had to read on. I guess compressing 30 years of some ones emotions in 50 odd lines is easy to criticise but even difficult to conceive. Well done.

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