Tuesday, February 7, 2006

The Old Commodore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Four boys and a Commodore
Four beers and the bonnet up
They peer deep into the unknown
With board shorts at half mast
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Elizabeth Russell
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Solomon Brook 07 February 2006

Nice poetic pictorial. Very nice Elizabeth. I just love the lines: 'With board shorts at half mast The ubiquitous Australian 'crack' The last thing you see when they pass' Hah! Too funny. The imagery was well timed and placed. Superb!

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