Monday, October 27, 2014

The Old Cloak Comments

Rating: 5.0

You wear it like an old black cloak
It smothers the light within.
Wherever you go, it's always there
Keeping out the good people bring.
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Jodie Hardy
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2017

Don't let it hold you back! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2017

Congrats, in depression if hope is alive, man is also alive.

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Lodigiana Poetess 30 November 2017

A lovely, positive and enheartening poem Jodie! congratulations on your Poem of the Day - a lovely work thank you for sharing...10 well deserved! Lodigiana

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 November 2017

Yeah, it is nice. What is old should be discarded and new should be accepted. 'Speak to anyone who'll listen. Forget the fog, don't let it hold you back now You have come so far, don't stop... don't stop now! '... is very nice. Message given in a nice way. Congrats.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 November 2017

Beautiful poem Jodie. By keeping away the burden of Old Cloak will ease you from all the fear. Concluded with positive thoughts. Loved reading it. Congratulations on member poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 November 2017

Such a brilliant and inspiring write, Jodie... Congrats for being chosen... a perfect 10👍👍👍

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 November 2017

one gains a lot and a bit of time keeping hope alive till and having unshakable faith in self defying the fear that comes your way........Jodie......cong. for being selected P.O.D..........VERY WELL CRAFTED.......thanks for sharing

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Tom Allport 30 November 2017

a poem with a positive message that there will be light at the end of the tunnel? ............nicely expressed Jodie.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2017

Hope and inspiration surviving and depression falling by the wayside. Very well expressed and written! Jodie, congratulations on Poem Of The Day! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Take off the old cloak It never served you any good..... Touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Bharati Nayak 30 November 2017

Outshine the fear, Leave behind the self doubt, Take off the old cloak It never served you any good. Speak to anyone who'll listen. Forget the fog, don't let it hold you back now You have come so far, don't stop... don't stop now! - - Doubts and fears are like black cloak that weigh us down.They block the light to enter our being..Once we overcome our fears, we can progress in a positive way. A nice poem, thanks for sharing.

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Jodie Hardy

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