Sunday, April 26, 2015

The Old Barn Comments

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The old barn now stands deserted,
Down next to the water well,
Alone in a field of grass and weed,
By the old sign that says, 'For Sale'.
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Richard Netherland Cook
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Lawerence Mize 26 April 2015

I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Clarence Prince 26 April 2015

A funny old barn's story! Now the boards of silver gray Lines the walls of someone's den Well, all is not lost, Richard! Thanks for sharing!

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Kelly Kurt 26 April 2015

Very descriptive. Excellent poem, Richard. Thanks

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