Friday, March 24, 2006

The Odyssey Comments

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Illiums' ruins burn behind me,
I stand on the shore and
Stare out across the wine-dark sea.
I pretend your standing on the shores of Ithaca,
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Charlie F. Kane
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Sebastian Hau-Walker 27 March 2006

Best Poem Yet! *fact* a truly beautifully writen beginning and consistent throughout the poem.... A personal favourite. sebxx

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David Gerardino 24 March 2006

Charlie, YOU WORKED ON THIS POEM, NICE JOB

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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