The Ode To Birth Comments

Great and fine expression10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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The verses of the poem show a talent true for writting poesy.

Thanks for the welcome. It's a great feeling for a newcomer. It would be a pleasure to join your poems.

you can feel a soul thrill from a kiss, you can die by your beloved's final cut. Excellent. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you. I offer u 10. and friend I invite u to go through my poems.

The stream of life a primordial, sacramental hymn, which only the soul can chant, silken and fractal dances with the wind in a melody of your own choice........laughing through the eyes of a newborn, , , , resurrection of a mother's embrace..... very great and fine expressions..... thank you. tony