The Ocean Comments

Well done. Congrats on poem of the day. Hmmmmm.... I just realized that you haven't submitted anything since 2007, so you probably won't see all these nice comments people are leaving.

Very good poem. Keep it up

Beautiful poetry full of hope. Thanks for sharing.

Upon the crest of a wave I see - there is a beauty in each words. Powerful concept. I like it.

It is amazing how a perfect poem can out of a untameable force like the ocean. This is a beautiful poem. Thank you.

Untameable force! ! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

I really like this, however it could read better with a bit of pruning. May I suggest the following first line? 0n a wave crest I see With best wishes JP

interesting. you make the ocean sound like a wild animal who may bite or may not. you never know.......... i like it.