Monday, February 6, 2006

The Ocean Waves Hello-Ii Comments

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The ocean waves hello and
Beckons with mists of wonder
It churns and turns and curls
Roaring out it's thunder
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Ray Andrews
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poopy 27 March 2020

hello waves

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Ray Andrews 06 February 2006

In the first version of this poem, the last two stanzas seemed to take on a life of their own. The current version is more what I had in mind originally-but maybe the first original is best! Blessings to all readers of poetry! Ray Andrews

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