Thursday, June 29, 2017

The Ocean's Blues Comments

Rating: 4.3

I feel this hypnotic thirst
to scream
and to be heard
but not simultaneously
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Ann Marge
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Jazib Kamalvi 12 July 2017

An inspiration indeed. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Ella Lazaare 30 June 2017

This really struck a chord with me and actually brought me happiness. I felt as though I had been heard because you so eloquently phrased thoughts which are abstract and nonverbal in my mind. I connected very well with this. Amazing job!

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Chinedu Dike 29 June 2017

Highly philosophical and very inspirational. Brave utterances set aside for honest contemplation. Thanks for sharing Ann.

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Simone Inez Harriman 29 June 2017

I felt sad reading your poem. The ocean has every reason to sing the blues. Many wonderful things on this planet appear to have no voice. But when we truly listen we can hear their song.

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