The Ocean Comments

I let it slip away with sand .Ocean is the confidant and dossier of all The waves, the sand, the light, the pain The memories. a beautiful poem.

Your poem ends on a beautiful high note. Good write, the ocean such mystery and secrets.

Savita, this is breathtaking you have taken me into the arms of the ocean and caressed my soul with the beauty through all the senses. Beautiful! ! Thank you so much! Love and Light. Blessings. If you wish you can read my poem I come here to think describing my experience with the the most beautiful God's creation, The sea, the ocean.. may it take you someplace too :) Thank you!

an interesting poem on our experiences on the shore of the ocean..Nice to read!