Saturday, January 23, 2010

The Ocean Comments

Rating: 3.1

Hearing the sound of the ocean roar
The sun shinning on the sea shimmering
Watching the segul's soar
And the sand glimmering
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Aly Churchill
COMMENTS
Hnt Var 14 February 2010

Great poem! Nicely done..

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C. P. Sharma 23 January 2010

An innocent composition shines in celestial light. CP

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