The Obsessive Agony Of Lust Comments
Self lost in obsessive agony,
Your primal passion - a flaming ferocity,
The raging fire consumes your dignity,
And shame is put to slumber.
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stanza 3, line 3: To what/who does 'which' refer? ? I guess you are referring to the 'elusive dream'. Yes, a dream of sexual which is not fulfilled. RATS! ! !
Certainly unrequited love and unrequited may both lead to TROUBLE for both the lover/'luster' and the loved/'lusted after'
I especially enjoy your: 'wayward twin of Love' I MEAN I enjoy your use fo the words, NOT the idea of engaging in LUST, though I have visited at times. 'Love' and 'Lust' can both be enjoyable AND 'dangerous'.
In your message I think you typed An......., but PH shows The...... In either case, now I'll read and comment. ;)
An excellent poem on "the wayward twin of Love" "The raging fire consumes your dignity" may our natures find true contentment.
Anyone who practices this act is devoid of manners and reason. An animal. He must seek professional help. Another brilliant work coined in a wonderful poem.
An ugly reflection of nature devoid of contentment. Lust: a bad dream in the forlorn bed of infatuation....powerful expression dear Chinedu. This poem is a great write on some burning social problems.
This superb poem is is brilliantly and eloquently written, and has such awesome imagery.5 stars.
Kai! You are really teaching me how to write brother. Please do read my poems as well.
Life drowning in bitter sweetened sensation : a bad dream in the forlorn bed of infatuation well penned such an educative and mind blowing piece of work.
Cont...powerful line from a well crafted and conveyed poem.
'The raging fire consumes your dignity, and shame put to slumber'. Powerful
The concept of being viewed as a nightmare in infatuation's phoney bed is beautiful and devilish- beautiful poetry.
Mind drowning in bitter-sweetened sensation, Onto elusive dream you hold fast - Which vanishes like mirage in a vast Desert: A lethal blend of hope and anxiety.
Metaphor, simile and deep meanings written in high poetic language, makes thinkers and intellectuals review their behaviours and personalities very often, in the light of this poem might they will criticize themselves as well. You write few poems but the quality is excellent. congratulations. it goes into my fav list 10++
Hi Soran, thanks a million times for your insightful appraisal of the poemp Remain enriched.
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last stanza: I believed that unless a person (usually a male I imagine, but it may not be so) has 'his' satisfied, the may result in a crime OR WORSE! ! [[e.g. murder or suicide]] five stars ***** bri : )