Wednesday, April 15, 2020

The Oath Comments

Rating: 5.0

The earth is turned to a battlefield
Fierce war is being fought.
A legion of Invisible novel terminators
Have unleashed attack against
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

I sincerely appreciate this creditable piece of poetry on topic of high significance on social issues.

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Thank youverymuch dear Dr. Dillip. However the enemy has set to retreat. We must see the last of them flee

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

Typo: topic

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

Absolutely brilliant. I sincerely appreciate this creditable piece on a top of importance. Top score.

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Valsa George 25 April 2020

Yes, this is a relentless fight against a formidable enemy! Though thousands may fall dead on the battlefield, there is no going back! We will fight until the invisible enemy is completely vanquished! Love this beautiful small poem!

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Thank you very much dear friend. Let the war continue till we are victorious against the evils of this unscrupulous villain

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2020

O to fight against an invisible foe, but fight we must, debt to humanity we owe. inspiring piece

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Thank you Pathakji very much for the encouraging comments. We are bound to care for the society. Let us hope for the best. LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 April 2020

A sort of inspirational write that provoke people to fight all odds to get success in life. Very beautifully crafted to make it interesting. Thanks for sharing. 'Nor to sheath the swords until the last of the enemy is slain'.. is nice and no respite till the war is over.

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Thank you AKP. A friend of mine asked me, " Why don't you write on Corona? ' So I wrote. If it carries the qualities you said I am blessed

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2020

A powerful write well conveyed. The last four lines can fuel the mind to rise and join the war. A great oath well written.

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The war against our enemy Kovid 19 being decisive with respect to the fatality aspect I feel it to be gallantry to loin feelings of well wishers of humanity. Thank you very much

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