The Oasis Comments

Swimming in the sea of sensuality that is fed from a river of romance. Well worded my friend!

An amazing write with sweet melody and soul soothing. Love your ink.

An amazing write with sweet melody and soul soothing. Love your ink.

A Fantastic write Hazel. Beautiful flow of words...... Playing within the sanctuary of my head, As we lie in the oasis of our king size bed. Quite romantic and beautiful imagery of oasis portrayed. Loved it. Beautiful presentation.

An amazing beauty. Truth replaced the lie, I was not a weird loner, Just a woman with fear holding her captive, In a sometimes cold, opinionated world, ..................10

Lovely romantic train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned. A beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

Time is like a childish rhyme seems too beautiful and wonderful thoughts shine through presentation. Playing with the sanctuary over head is oasis definitely speaks something. Once more read your poem and felt to leave another comment on re-reading.

Life is renewed and new meanings invested with the touch of love at a time when you feared that the sand under your feet was beginning to slip and you were losing your balance! You are now excited as traveller who has found an oasis in a blistering desert! Let your union be one of pure bliss! Beautiful write, Hazel!

Exquisite composing. Good word choice. Many thanks dear madam!

I was out of step with life......beautifully presented. So pleased your heart is now filled. x

playing with the sanctuary of my head as we lie in the oasis of our king size bed lovelt thoughts Hazel

sweet poem, very sweet. i love it.Thank you.

sweet poem very sweet.i love it.

The Oasis is nice poem by Hazel Time is like a childish rhyme, thank you