Old age knocked on my door and enjoined
‘Over, your stint in the desert’
Obeyed, though my reveries remain unfulfilled
Oddments of my odds and sods are wrapped up to carry along
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This is a nice moving poem sir.. Generally I like to read narrative poems. And you have woven it very nicely.. Good..10 regards Shan
you have wonderfully painted the memories, that linger in mind.........
Memories can be great company and looking back on one's life a comfort.Enjoy each day...you make even a very sad poem sound beautiful.A ten.You are a real poetry gem! ! ! ! ! I'm glad I found your poems.
Geriatric memory and contemplation of bygone days are of mixed bag type…here you’ve very aptly conceived and poemed….… thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10