Saturday, August 5, 2023

The Nothing I've Become Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once I was a flicker, a flame ablaze,
With dreams that soared, in myriad ways.
But life's tempests, like relentless drums,
Whispered their secrets, and left me numb.
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Clyde UrMom
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Rob Lamberton 15 August 2023

A individual who holds their tongue through the symphony of thought makes beautiful and classical music!

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 August 2023

Great poem x Well done : )

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2023

(cont.) I think/know that my wife would always rather have me thinking rather than speaking. ;)))))))) bravo! five stars ***** bri : )

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2023

Did I read another poem by you earlier today, containing 'petals'? ? ? Someone's poem had them. Hm? I liked that poem also. Among others I also esp. enjoyed 'A symphony of thoughts, but no sound.'. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2023

line 4: WHAT 'secrets'? ? The left you good-numb or bad-numb? ? I hope I enjoy the rest of the poem as much. : )

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2023

(CONT.) 'IMFAO is an abbreviation that stands for In My F**king Arrogant Opinion, a slang expression used to forcefully assert your opinion. It is often used in texting, chat, and online platforms.' i NEVER heard of Imfao. I may start using it with my wife. ;)

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2023

Re your Poet's Notes: Yes, hands often can use, nay/moreover even 'need', something to do. (CONT.)

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