The Notes Of Autumn Comments

Such a beautiful word picture of autumn... love it very mcuh.

Nature! ! With the muse of the gentle rain. Nice work.

Three images in six lines, four senses evoked: sight, sound, scent, touch, title image - these are the components of your poem, in the tradition of hundreds, no, thousands of Chinese poets before you, and they would all recognize the poetry you're writing. I'm going to write a similar poem today in the Twin Cities because it's same kind of day here.

Thrilling expression on autumn. A marvellous poem that touches the heart and mind. Many thanks dear Cigeng, keep the ball rolling......10

Another beautiful piece, and I sense the zen. I am especially mesmerised with your metaphor Clear autumn is the spring. Thanks for sharing Cigeng.

Another autumn comes around with russet and golden leaves and, yes..... the rain. Good poem.