Wednesday, May 31, 2006

The Note Comments

Rating: 5.0

one night on the beach
i chanced upon a bottle
with a little note bearing words so chilly
i thought it should be left
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john tiong chunghoo
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Sweetie Sarah<3 31 May 2006

it gives me the shivers. Just trying to guess wat the note said. it could be many things. Nice work. Sweetie Sarah

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Sophia White 31 May 2006

True poetry, John. I feel like I was there, that I was the one who picked up the bottle. Very well done.

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Brian Dorn 31 May 2006

John, some things are better left alone. Excellent write! ! Brian

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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