Saturday, November 23, 2019

The Note I Didn't Write Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a note I wish to write to you every night
it is filled with words of passion and delight
often felt throughout my day
but sometimes time just slips away
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 02 December 2019

Copyrighted? ? ? ! Gee, who would WANT to steal this? I would! ! ! this is a wonderful poem, though, ....i usually don't get enthused over 'love poems' and i'm not enthused about writing them. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Aqua Flower 02 December 2019

I write that on all my poems, silly. They are my words and I like expressing them. Thank you for liking my " love" poem especially that you are not often enthused about writing them....hmmmm maybe you should. :)

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Susan Williams 01 December 2019

Beautiful! You have captured that moment so many often feel but don't take ahold of the moment to tell in writing or vocally to the one we love. Extraordinary write, my friend! 10+++++++++

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Aqua Flower 02 December 2019

Thank you Susan for the lovely comment. ith the hectic lifestyles of today and work demands, we sometimes forget to express to our love ones how much they mean to us. This was a poem to say just that. Love can be unspoken but sometimes words can reinforce.

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C F 27 November 2019

Smooth flowing lines, one of your best poem I have read so far.10+

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Aqua Flower 02 December 2019

Thank you Chito. So nice of you to write this comment!

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Amir Marandi 24 November 2019

" they are etched in my heart and sung every day" . A lovely and passionate poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 25 November 2019

Thank you! I'm happy you have read it and likes it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 November 2019

True love needs no expression, yes indeed, beautifully put

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Aqua Flower 25 November 2019

Yes, when two hearts can feel each other's soul, no words are ever needed! thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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Kostas Lagos 23 November 2019

Even if not expressed, love is always there.10!

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Aqua Flower 24 November 2019

You must always express ourselves the best we can but there are times in life at like just gets the better of us and we forget. I'm glad you got the meaning of the poem. It is important to tell a loved ones that we love them everyday in some way or another. Thank you for commenting.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 November 2019

A succinctly pleasing poem...Well structured...Keep that pen pumping! [FjR'19]

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Aqua Flower 23 November 2019

Thank you so much for reading it! I also appreciate the encouragement. :)

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