The Note Comments

Awesome poem. Children have a way into our hearts even when we're upset with them - the note touched my heart with a smile and tear. As a Mom and Grandma, I have been there myself many times. Your poem tells it so perfectly. RoseAnn

On great and responsible seats there is always a training session, and internship goes before, but motherhood is that office which has no training before, she has to go through this experience moment by moment: I wish I knew what to do with the child For someday she’ll be grown. I don’t want to be harsh yet all the while... the dramatic poem! ! !

this is a beautiful story, but the most beautiful part is her note to you I love you -please forgive

What a strong yet tender poem. As a mother and grandmother, I've fought that battle many times. Thank you for a lovely poem. Alice

And to think of what the bible says. About when man comes of age, he shall. Put away his toys and to act this, his age. I always look forward to your word's, Adeline. And I thank you.......iip

this brought a tear - I can empathize with both mother and child and the poem is so real..... brilliant writing!

Children need guidance as well as love. Great write Adeline.

Yes very true! This all they need! The he children shall survive anything if they have love and forgiveness seeded into their hearts!

a nice write. children will be children. they never change, they know how to annoy us and make us feel guilty

A nice write. Throughout history parents have worried and children rebelled and yet we endure and love finds its way and always will. Thank you.

Children, through generations, have had the innate ability to make us feel guilty, long may it continue.

What a sweet poem - tugged at my heartstrings. Children will have that effect upon us, bless them all! Always nice to read your words.