I would have liked to see the ending rhyming lines separated & not all flowing together. That's just my preference for a poem. (old fashioned I guess-lol) You still portrayed a lovely message in your poem though.
Ravensong
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I would have liked to see the ending rhyming lines separated & not all flowing together. That's just my preference for a poem. (old fashioned I guess-lol) You still portrayed a lovely message in your poem though. Ravensong