Saturday, May 30, 2020

The Not Travel Comments

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the not travel

I was up early going to my little house
in Benafim, I need some work done like water leaks
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Jan Oskar Hansen
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2020

A loving and caring attitude towards the beloved wife. To be respected such a behaviour. Indeed much cozier if the poet's wife will come along. I like very much the loving and caring attitude in the poem. These words made the beautiful poem most beautiful. What do we wish in life than being together constantly with the loved one in such an understandable way. Thank you so much for sharing this beauty of heart

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Varsha M 30 May 2020

Lovely poetry requesting the sick wife to be by his side because she is good and explicit than him. Awesome gratitude. Thank-you Sir. Admirations.

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