Saturday, December 6, 2008

The Not So Perfect Family Comments

Rating: 4.8

The perfect family
Or so it seems
All the children
Shining like beams
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Brianna Trombley
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This is such an interesting story. My Mother used to say 'scratch under any carpet' meaning nothing is always as it seems. Parents are often under pressure and have time to find enough time for children sometimes. I just enjoyed this piece so much, because it gave me great insight into a life that is not what it seems. 10 Karin Anderson

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The Hawk 18 January 2009

sometimes the family is best on the outside and not so much on the inside

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Little Morning Star 15 December 2008

nothing perfect in this world but we still have to be thankful of it.. great work..

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Kimber Harrison 07 December 2008

I really really liked it. No one never really sees into the heart of a family, whether it be good or bad, they never really know.

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

Michigan
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