In the spring, I arrive as a gentle breeze
With the summer, I have my moods
In the autumn, I am stripping naked the trees
With the winter, my heart is an empty room
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This poem has a heartbeat! It dances and sings! It touches the soul!
Trust you to make this poem unique and fresh and powerful and vivid and a joy to read!
This is how great poetry works. It is like a sparkling diamond that dazzles the eyes and tingles the mind. Another poetic gem that goes straight to my Poem List and the brilliant Poet to my Poet List. So beautifully written.Loved reading it.
Wow, thank you for such a kind comment, you humble me with your words, I have written hundreds of poems and I think there is only a handful that I’m happy with but this is my favorite one, I truly thank you my friend for your kind words
A song I am singing within the chimes/My fingers are strumming the notes in the leaves....sparkling poetic expression! I find profound poetic beauty in this magnificent piece of poetry my friend! (10)
In the spring, I arrive as a gentle breeze With the summer, I have my moods In the autumn, I am stripping naked the trees With the winter, my heart is an empty room Yes my name is the wind I carry the albatross all of his days Coming and going wherever I please - - - - -An exquisitely beautiful poem, I will come back to read again and again.To my favorite list.
Not only a starry-eyed bunch of 10's but onto my fav list with this magical write! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++
A song I am singing within the chimes My fingers are strumming the notes in the leaves Caressing the fields of the fully grown wheat- - - - - - - - - - -I had to draw attention to these lines too. That is so descriptive of what the wind does with the chimes on my porch! ! ! And then you carry the musical instrument theme into the next line, then gently and sweetly play off the fingers and carry them into the next line.
In the autumn, I am stripping naked the trees With the winter, my heart is an empty room- - - -These are pure delicious Bill Cantrell lines... striking and powerful in describing and in raising emotions at the same time.! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
You have captured the wind in all its beauty, essence, moods. Artful inking.
A wonderful poem of something that is invisible yet is there? Beautiful write Bill
Lovely poem, Bill. I'm originally from the Scottish HIghlands, so As I howl through the treacherous glen takes me to rugged, wild places. And the closing sentiment, with its imagery of the child and the red balloon sends a wave of kindliness back over the title.
Ever so beautifully moving more than words could say! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
In summer you have many moods. But when summer arrives we feel breeze of life in gentle manner with breeze of nature. We carry prayers to heaven very high. The wave of acceptance and goodbye dance more and more. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10
This poem knocked the wind out of me! . Thank you for sharing and re-posting it! I like the personificaiton throughout the poem. You writings flow and seen effortless.
You make magic with that pen of yours.5 stars and favorited!