The Noose Comments

-I Might Do Do That- Asking People To Read Something Of Mine Seems Like A Good Way Of Getting Better Suggestions...(Thank You :)

more people deserve to read your poems, there are many veterans out here who have written great poems.ask some of them to read your poems, they will never disappoint you, your work is good (read; it's crying to be read)

All I Am, and all I Own; Nothing Matters, No-One Cares, Ignore my Pleas, Ignore My Cares; my favorite line from this poem, great rhythm.

so musical... you employed your rhythm so effectively.10

i really enjoyed this poem - really loved the way it moved - Great job!