Wednesday, March 18, 2009

The None Rhyming Poem (Maybe It's Not A Poem At All) Comments

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I feel like I am standing. No…Drowning three feet under water.
Screaming for help. But no one seems to be coming.
I feel like my own Carbon is filling my lungs
The more I try to push the water away from my mouth the more air I loose.
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Charlotte Ambrosia
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Victor Gama Sabbithi 15 June 2009

Does it happen or is it being lead in? its ryhms fine. feels like a poem

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nice poem...doesn't matter if it rhymes....its still just as good

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