The Nondescript Flower Comments
The soft breeze called me
Out into the open vastness
Where lay the green carpet
And the bed of flowers
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there are many rooms of nature where poetic feelings, poetic love roams and revolves step by step. poetic vision enjoys all and plans to live immensely on the big beautiful heart of nature////
I closed my eyes in pure joy When I opened my eyes Found the flower nowhere Perhaps she had melted into my being These are the lines which attracted me to this poem serving a feast dear to the palate. Thank you Bharati Nayak for the immensely rich lines
This poem has been so touchingly and hauntingly inscribed on nature and love that it attracts me to read over and over again. As the colorful flower disappears from your hand when you open your eyes I feel it is a dream or you are in the wave of feelings. However this is a brilliant poem so nicely executed. Full vote.
.........it refreshing my mind, what a wonderful gift....beautiful! Thank you, ma'am, for sharing!
Thank you Bipin Churchung Rabha for your time and appreciation of my simple poem.
A wonderful poem dear Bharati Apa! Loved reading it...10
In pure joy! With the beauty of the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wow- - Thank you Edward Kofi Louis.Yes it is joyful to get your comment just after posting it.
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9/13/2025 2:50:18 AM # 1.0.0
A lovely poem. The lucidity of poetic expression is quite commendable. Beautifully composed dear poetess.