It feels wrong for the sun to be shining
And I don't feel much like rain
Today life should stand still
I can't tell if anythings changed
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This Kate is a very deep emotional piece of work.I love how you expressed what many, if not all of us feel at sometime or another in our lives.Truly all of us have these moments...I believe this to be true anyway.
I enjoyed how you repeated
'Dont let them see you cry
They'll just ask and you'll just lie
So go and your room and hide'
Very powerful words,4 sure a poem that made me think.
Thanx for sharing Kate.............
Remember though we only come around this way once and we can not allow our selves to stay in these days for too long.((Smile))
=Shelley=
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This Kate is a very deep emotional piece of work.I love how you expressed what many, if not all of us feel at sometime or another in our lives.Truly all of us have these moments...I believe this to be true anyway. I enjoyed how you repeated 'Dont let them see you cry They'll just ask and you'll just lie So go and your room and hide' Very powerful words,4 sure a poem that made me think. Thanx for sharing Kate............. Remember though we only come around this way once and we can not allow our selves to stay in these days for too long.((Smile)) =Shelley=