Wednesday, March 1, 2006

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Oh please I beg
Don't get me wrong
It's not the black I fear
But the unknown deep in the dark
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Steffi Webster
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Ben Paynter 05 March 2006

hey stef this may be my new favorite poem by you, i have felt similarly, the unkown is terrifying because it causes that one word which i fear most, surprise. you captured what i have felt many times and put it into words that no one can mistake. hope all is well. ben

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Purple Rose 01 March 2006

We are frightened of things we can't see and mostly of the dark! Nice writing! Purple Rose

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