Sunday, August 5, 2012

The Nights And Your Eyes Comments

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The nights and your eyes
How they are alike
With both I'm in love Since I'm alive
They are my best friends The nights and your eyes
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Sossi Khachadourian
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Simon Odhiambo 09 August 2012

The night and your eyes...the tears as we depart. Well said.

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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

I so love the title and the way this piece flows Sossi! Great write! -Kelly.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 05 August 2012

great write...and good use of metaphors.

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