The Nightmare That Set Me Free Comments

very nice job my dear. I love the last stanza the best.....it shows how even though some things may be a bad mistake you still learn from them.

Agreed, this definitly has a nice feel to it. Good pace and I like how theres a lesson at the end. Sometimes we can feel like something dsappointing happened and it was all for nothing but I like how your poem so vividly depicts that we can usually find one once we sift through all the emotions and frustrations surrounding a situation. My fav line: But I tossed and turned until I was freed. Thanks for sharing.

I like the ending, very nice message. When i was reading it, I read it as a narrative to a story or show. I has a nice feel to it. Good job