'The Nightingale Sang Too Early' Comments

This is very good writing Ajith. Thank you for asking me to comment. Firstly may I suggest that you leave out the opening sentence you offer by way of explanation. You don't need it. The poem speaks very clearly. And I'd change the title too - I'd call it 'The Nightingale Sang too Early'. It's a much more lyrical title for a poem with an uplifting moral theme as well as an interesting and original harmonic structure. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. You have quite a gift. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

she forgot the grief of staying alone and still the memories of flocking together made her heart beat a few times more and pump blood a few drops more this is fantastic! ! ! I love it! ! sometimes the hardest thing is to wait. well done. *Crystal Midnight*

May the waiting is fruitful and thus will not abuse the right to wait.Nice writes Ajith.

A philosophical creation, inspiring to read, it certainly alerts our selves to the certain point of veiw that you have chosen to convey!

Ajith This is a poem of beauty and philosophy. Than you.....Karin Anderson

I agree with Anju...bravoooo! ! ! !

this is really amazing! keep writing! Jess xx

nice work and youy have put some effort into it its way better than my peoms :) 10++++++++++++++++++++

Right to wait and strike, This is a secret lesson of life................. Good Work.............