The Night When It Rained (A Poet's Dilemma) Comments
Rating: ★5.0
It rained that night and lightening flashed,
The wild wind smote my window pane.
So much that I felt it were rude,
Not respecting my loneliness,
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It rained that night and lightening flashed,
The wild wind smote my window pane.
So much that I felt it were rude,
Not respecting my loneliness,
Nor caring for my solitude.
It's a nice beginning.
Now dawn to dusk I glimpse the skies,
That thunder clouds may gather soon.
And how I pray that it remain,
Until twilight has spread her veil,
To end my fevered ceaseless pain
You have expressed your pain from waiting so beautifully!
I feel that night is coming soon,
When I would bask in heaven's boon,
My angel sweet would come to me,
Again one dark and thundery night,
And gather me into her arms
To embark on a blissful flight,
So I be spared from loneliness
And be entombed in heaven's light.
I appreciate your hopefulness here.
A very nice poem.
I enjoyed it. A perfect 10 for it.
Dear Subhas, Thank you for reading my verses with such care and depth. Am indebted at your reading so finely between the lines. A mark of a true and talented poet. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Warm Regards!
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It rained that night and lightening flashed, The wild wind smote my window pane. So much that I felt it were rude, Not respecting my loneliness, Nor caring for my solitude. It's a nice beginning. Now dawn to dusk I glimpse the skies, That thunder clouds may gather soon. And how I pray that it remain, Until twilight has spread her veil, To end my fevered ceaseless pain You have expressed your pain from waiting so beautifully! I feel that night is coming soon, When I would bask in heaven's boon, My angel sweet would come to me, Again one dark and thundery night, And gather me into her arms To embark on a blissful flight, So I be spared from loneliness And be entombed in heaven's light. I appreciate your hopefulness here. A very nice poem. I enjoyed it. A perfect 10 for it.
Dear Subhas, Thank you for reading my verses with such care and depth. Am indebted at your reading so finely between the lines. A mark of a true and talented poet. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Warm Regards!