Thursday, October 12, 2017

The Night Watch Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I watch the crossing voyage of the moon
Trace along the curve of the greyland
Fragments of vapor trails unravel the fibers of infinite shadows with its bastion of Orange hues.
The conglomerate of stars that monitor the bedlam and plague of the night evades their testimony behind the threat of the horizon like a silent witness.
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Vincent Feliciano
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Bill Cantrell 12 October 2017

Very nice poem Vince! ! Wonderfully written! !

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Vincent Feliciano 12 October 2017

Thank you very much...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Crossing voyage of the moon along the curve of the greyland was amazing that gave green feelings to vapour to unravel the fibers of infinite shadows. An amazing perception you had gained about nature. This is brilliantly presented here.10

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Vincent Feliciano 12 October 2017

Thank you very very much...that makes me happy to hear

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Vincent, such a serene sight to see during the night watch... a highest 10++++

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Vincent Feliciano 12 October 2017

Thanks Bernard...very gracious of you

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Vincent Feliciano

Vincent Feliciano

Bronx, NY
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