How little she knew when she woke that dawn
the sorrow the day would bring
she had waited all night for her lover
it was dawn and she waited still
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nice! there are a lot of people out there who could relate to this beautiful poem
Excellent composition. I share your sorrow! Please read 'Is Not Perception...Reality.'
What an incredibly beautiful write this is, Laurena, one that tells a terrific story extremely well. You have quite skillfully written this fascinating tale using splendid imagery most tastefully and provided some drama for the reader as well. It is a remarkable tale you've penned and most certainly gets the reader to thinking on the supernatural. That this is a true story makes this poem all the more wonderful! Carl.
good poem, certainly deserved to be poem of the day!