Saturday, January 10, 2009

The Night Visitor Comments

Rating: 4.8

How little she knew when she woke that dawn
the sorrow the day would bring
she had waited all night for her lover
it was dawn and she waited still
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Laurena Pamela Willetts
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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 June 2015

good poem, certainly deserved to be poem of the day!

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Gauri Vyas 13 June 2015

Beautiful thought with decent words just as it needed to be

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 13 June 2015

nice! there are a lot of people out there who could relate to this beautiful poem

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Gordon Wilkinson 12 March 2009

i enjoyed the meeting of souls - 10

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James B. Earley 05 February 2009

Excellent composition. I share your sorrow! Please read 'Is Not Perception...Reality.'

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Lindsey Ashton 02 February 2009

this is lovely and well written,

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Carl Harris 29 January 2009

What an incredibly beautiful write this is, Laurena, one that tells a terrific story extremely well. You have quite skillfully written this fascinating tale using splendid imagery most tastefully and provided some drama for the reader as well. It is a remarkable tale you've penned and most certainly gets the reader to thinking on the supernatural. That this is a true story makes this poem all the more wonderful! Carl.

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Vaibhav Pandey 15 January 2009

lovely write...very appreciable.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 January 2009

Interesting story, has a sort of paranormal texture to it.

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Laurena Pamela Willetts

Laurena Pamela Willetts

south wales u.k.
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